lvjoe 发表于 2013-10-31 20:59   全显示 1楼
之前车震戏的安排是什么意思呢？是说的老婆吧，可惜后面交代的不是很清楚，显得这部分情节有些突兀。妻子在男厕被辱的戏份也觉得流水账了一些，个人认为这部分可惜写的更肉一点，更能勾起人的欲望，毕竟是色文，起性一些才过瘾。一点小意见，感谢作者的辛勤笔耕。
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