该用户匿名发帖 发表于 2009-7-25 20:26   全显示 1楼
Good story.  A lot of details describing how the girl anticipates  her dad wants from her and this really makes story more excited.  Great work and hope your personal issues can be taking care soon and finish up this story.  thanks a lot.
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