pmslymfz110 发表于 2011-2-13 09:31   全显示 1楼
楼主的这篇文章可说得上是惊天地，泣鬼神啊，不但以古代为背景，但是语言和行为都很现代啊，我看楼主搞个穿越也行啊。这篇文章里首先以妓院为开篇，确实是很独特，因为这是人妻类的文章，我还以为怎么能出现妓院呢，但是后来才发现旺旺女皇这个角色的特点，楼主这篇文章的线索很多，而且古代的背景也意味着要有武侠与武打方面的描写，楼主在这篇文章里不单单把色情的描写很到位，而且对武侠这一方面的描写也很到位，但是看得出楼主还有后续吧，期待楼主的后续。
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