查看完整版本: 【武林艳史别记】(8)

Another master piece of writing!

It is very rarely to read such wonderful adult Wu Shei story in recent days.

It is true there are lots of such type of adult stories flooding the market or most of the websites, but unfortunately not so many writers deserve our highest recommendations of 5 stars. (I use the number of stars to show the position of international hotels. 5 Stars are ranked as Number 1)

I am not flattering the writer when I have ranked him as a novelist with 5 stars. Though I have not read the other chapters of this wonderful amended story, just by reading Chapter 8 has already given us a very great sense of surprisingly happiness. Now, finally we have another author who has a strong shadow of our greatest Wu Shei writings - Jin Yong.

The very opening paragraphs have already attracted all the readers' attentions. There is a quotation of a very famous poet''s poem as the starting point of this chapter. Then what follows are a detail description and presenting of the meanings in the poem together with the writer's personal appreciations of the beauties embrassed by the amazing, peaceful and beautiful surroundings.

All the descriptions are so wonderful that they simply remind us our fantastic novelist - Jin Yong. Very similar to Jin Yong, the writer has presented to the readers a very beautiful picture of the famous scenery of the place in China which is still a wonderful place for to-day's tourists.

This is made possible only by the writer's very high proficiency in Chinese Literature. Unlike the other novelists who like to start their stories with very few descriptions of the background of the story but are fillled with immediate presentations of lots of sex scenes and acts, this writer has successfully given us a very peaceful and calm opening to such an extent that it seems we are enjoying the beautiful scenery with breeze blowing in the same way as the writer's main character.

Such a success of making the readers to indulge in such a heavenly beauty is made possible only by this writer's excellent knowledge in Chinese literacy. For this point we give this writer a Distinction.

The characterizations of the main characters are very impressive indeed. The techniques and choice of dictions are so impressive that we can immediately form pictures of what these characters look like. Such skills can also be seen in Jin Yong's novels, especially in his descriptions of his main male and female characters such as Guo Jing, Yang Guo,Huang Rong and Xiao Long Nu. This is the reason why I have said that this writer can be compared to our greatest novelist, Jin Yong.

In a good novel, what the readers demand are a good plot and background, a good theme, a detailed description of the major characters and an use of high Chinese literary words. All these have been presented by the writer to the readers. We are given the impressions that the main male character is so handsome that he is very much liked and loved by many female sex and the female character is very beautiful but a bit wanton. All their characteristics are detailly described. We are also told that they are rich so they can enjoy their lives luxuriosly such as dressing first class clothings and hiring top class ships. Once again, the writer is marvellous to use his high command of Chinese words to give us all such pictures.

Then all a sudden, there is a dramatic change of atmosphere from peace to the coming possible bloodshed, killing or slaugtery. While this young couple is enjoying their sweet dreams of romance, they have overheard there is a possible attack to the base of the female character. This leads to an unwilling suddenly departure of this young couple. The writer once again is very successful in detailing the inward feelings of their sadness of separating.

There are not too many sex descriptions in the chapter, as what the writer has said previously. Yet from a few implications of the descriptions of the sexy bodies of the female character, her temptations to play the young man's sex organ and the later appearances of his mother and aunt whom look to him very sexy as well. All these have told us that though there not so much have been talked about sex acts, we can expect some more are coming not only very explicit descriptions of sex acts, but also some very abnormal sex relationships as well, that is adulteries.

All in all, this is a wonderful writer of adult Wu Shing novels who can rank next to our internationally well known novelist - Jin Yong.

谢谢作者的改编
云平的母亲和姨妈终于现身了
喜欢看乱伦的内容
原来看过云平和姨妈搞的内容
不过那个没有作者的文笔功底
通篇就是啊，大鸡巴什么的

还是一样的好看，和原著一样的强大。非常喜欢楼主写的，看了几遍，还是很有感觉的。希望楼主多多的加油，多多的更新，支持楼主！:excellence

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还文章啊,等了几年了.希望LZ继续发扬光大!!

改编的<别记>,好.文字优美,十分耐看.
本來是一篇后续的工程,可不要续到半路,又缩回去.
真的是好啊!望猪八大大完成初愿,抽时间趕趕,千万别tj.

原著很短，没有找到很完整的版本，希望这里能看到更多更好的章节

在别的地方也看到了标题为《武林艳史别记》的文章，可是和LZ的文章似乎内容有些不同。我支持LZ，不过好象很久没有更新了。等待中——

这个武林艳史别记写的很不错，每一集都很有看头

不管前人写的如何， 你写的还是蛮好看的， 谢谢了， 加油呀！

楼主，不要更改别人的东西，我看你的文笔也不如以前的，希望写小说能有个结尾，不然很让人着急的。

作者笔力挺好的，剧情也行。

原文我喜欢了好久啊 很期待啊 尤其是云平对他母亲的幻想